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DrakBlueSoul22
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Roleplay Name: Yuriko Oki

PostSubject: Yuriko Oki (redone)   Tue Nov 24, 2009 9:30 am

Full Name: Yuriko Oki
Nicknames: Yuri
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: Fall 16

Appearance:


- Height: "5"6
- Eye Color: A soft green
- Hair: long bluish/green colored (straight) hair
- Clothing: usually wears a brown underbelly shirt with a white top jacket (leather straps on the side) usually with a pink skirt
- Picture:
Biography: Yuriko was the daughter of an old fisherman; her only friend was her "sister" Amaya who was left at their father's doorstep as a child. Yuriko's mother died when she was 5 years old, her life she spent her days sitting by the ocean daydreaming. She spent most of her time going on adventures with Amaya.

[color=brown]-Family: most of her famley is dead or overseas as fisherman, only known relitive is Amaya
-Character Personality Pros: smart, caring, kind, warm-hearted, artistic, and ambitious
-Character Personality Flaws: clumsy, not much common sense, and speaks with out thinking occasionally, is a push over sometimes, doesnt always move on quickly, can be ignorant sometimes
-Likes: reading, taking walks by the lake, love animals, loves to help people, art, and music.
-Dislikes: onions, mean people,
-Extra Information: Yuriko grew up traveling around most of her life with Amaya and their so called “guardian”, meeting new people and seeing new things. Yuriko’s mother had passed away shortly after Yuriko turned three. After, Yuriko and Amaya stayed together, whenever they docked in a land they would take off to find adventures. Yuriko’s dad passed away when she was 15. Leaving her alone, Amaya had gone off to see the world. Yuriko stayed with the fisherman for a year.
Harvest World Dream Job: I would like to work at the animal clinic. To take care of the animals on the farms. I love animals.


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PostSubject: Re: Yuriko Oki (redone)   Wed Nov 25, 2009 10:41 am

It seems her personality is quite sweet in a way, but it seems a little too sweet (Mary-Sue-ish) due to the type and lack of flaws. Add a little more flaws or add something else to the personality and she'll be fine. Wink

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Roleplay Name: Yuriko Oki

PostSubject: :)   Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:42 am

Okay, thank you. I have added more flaws to her personality. Razz
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