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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun May 17, 2009 4:16 am | |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
2nd char:Roan
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Thu May 21, 2009 11:46 pm | |
| dear diary, i was so blushing when gray touched my hands..i-i i was eeeeeeeee...blushing red!!!! but he inspired me to work even more harder... he is so dreamy... i wish i had two hearts for cliff and gray... claire
*the next day,claire decided to go to the lake for a gathering wild items* *claire notices doctor in the lake and quickly hurries* claire:trent!!! *doctor quickly look to see the one calling his true name..* doctor:hi claire.. claire:what are you doing here? doctor:i'm gathering herbs for medicine..but it seems that there nothing here.. claire:this place is relaxing.. doctor:it is because of the negative ions.. claire:ahhh..let's not talk about work..it's not fun to stay serious at work always right? doctor:ok,then what will we do for fun? claire:let's play tag!!! doctor:seems childish but it's exercise... claire:i told you..*touch doctor softly on his shoulder and ran off*tag!!!you're it!!! doctor:i'll get you..*ran off* *the two kept chasing on each other until it reached 8 am,they both lied in the grassland near mother's hill* claire:*pant*that what i called exercise and fun!!! doctor:*pant*it is tiring.. claire:so do you liked the game? doctor:yes..thanks claire... claire:why? doctor:you gived me a reason not to be lonely... claire:so the reason why you are always serious is because you're alone?
*claire stand up and stated singing a new song*
I hear the ticking of the clock I'm lying here the room's pitch dark I wonder where you are tonight No answer on the telephone And the night goes by so very slow Oh I hope that it won't end though Alone
Till now I always got by on my own I never really cared until I met you And now it chills me to the bone How do I get you alone How do I get you alone
You don't know how long I have wanted to touch your lips and hold you tight, oh You don't know how long I have waited and I was going to tell you tonight But the secret is still my own and my love for you is still unknown Alone
Till now I always got by on my own I never really cared until I met you And now it chills me to the bone How do I get you alone How do I get you alone
How do I get you alone How do I get you alone
Alone, alone
*the doctor was staring at claire* claire:why are you staring?*blush* doctor:.....nothing... claire:now,don't feel alone because i'm with you.. doctor:thank you..*blush* claire;you must be going to work now.. doctor:*saws a flower*but before i leave i'll give this to you...*picks the flower and hands it to claire* claire:thanks..*kiss doctor on the cheeks*i'll keep this on my vase..*rans with a smile and leave* doctor:thanks..*blushing bright red*
*claire hurriedly went to here house and wrote down the day* |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sat May 23, 2009 12:31 am | |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
2nd char:Roan
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sat May 23, 2009 4:47 am | |
| thank you..i'm about to finish it and a few chapters and it's done..the ending of this story is quite not very good... thanks for supporting it.. |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun May 24, 2009 12:43 am | |
| if you think the ending isn't very good why don't you make it continue or something? |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
2nd char:Roan
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun May 24, 2009 4:17 am | |
| claire is marrying none of them...she is going to leave town... |
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gothica800 Banned


Number of posts: 4632
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun May 24, 2009 6:23 am | |
| "awww, make her marry someone, it'll be better, i don't think too many people like sad endings, i create love triangles all the time and sometimes i change course about who ciera marries, it's not hard, just choose your favorite guy and have her take him, simple as that." |
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Eternal Silence Admin


Number of posts: 6205 Roleplay Name: Arden Auiban Awards: 
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun May 24, 2009 8:58 am | |
| Actually, Claire leaving town is a good story twist in my opinion. All the gooey, happy fluffy HM fanfics get kinda repetitive after a while. Not every story has a happy ending, especially the good ones.
Maybe that's just me, though.
I'd like to see how you do this, Amando. I can't wait for the next few chapters! |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Mon May 25, 2009 9:17 am | |
| yeah. I think that you should do what is right in your opinion amando. don't let others misguide you. |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
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 | Subject: chapter 9-meet claff!!! Tue May 26, 2009 5:04 am | |
| dear diary, i just have fun with trent this afternoon..i get annoyed once because he is sooo scientifical speaking..but we have fun in the end... i am so happy... i wish i had three hearts for cliff,gray and trent... claire
*as usual,the next morning..claire awoke up very early..she hurriedly went to her two female chickens..chix and yolly..* *at the coop* claire:*looks at chix*ahh..chix..this maybe a stupid question i'm asking you...who should i gave my heart? to a humble hopeful homeless,or to an inspiring wannabe blacksmith or a scientifical speaking serious doctor? chix:*stares*cluck.. claire:how about you yolly?*stares at yolly* yolly:*stares*cluck... claire:ahh..never mind..here's your food..*takes chicken feed from bag,then puts the feed in the feed box* *looks at her wallet*aha!!!it's time to buy a cow!!!yay!! *she hurriedly went to barley's farm..but she bumped cliff which he is in a hurry too..*
cliff:morning!!i'm so sorry about what happened..you look like your in a hurry.. claire:morning too..!i'm gonna buy a cow.. cliff:can i.. claire:what? cliff:can i come with you? claire:sure... cliff:let's get going!!!
*at the store,barley was wipping his eyes* barley:how's the newlyweds? claire and cliff:HA!!no..*blush* claire:i'm just here to buy a cow.. barley:ahh...claire right..what's gonna be the name of the cow? claire:hmm..*puts finger on her head* cliff:i hope you chose a great name.. claire:*looks at cliff* barley:so what gonna be her name? claire:CLAFF!!! barley:*shocked*what a...*cough*pre..tty name.. cliff:why claff?*shocked* claire;it's you and me..see claire and cliff..in that way i'll remember you..always.. cliff:*blush*how kind of you.. claire:don't worry i'll take care of her..always as if i was caring for you.. cliff:*bush*thanks.. claire:let's go now.. barley:(how sweet)now...i'll just deliver it to you.. claire:thanks..let's go now cliff..*low voice and sweet voice* cliff:sure..
*the two went outside and parted with saying a sweet goodbye to each other*
Last edited by clairexcliff on Thu May 28, 2009 4:15 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : continuation..) |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
2nd char:Roan
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 | Subject: chapter 10-tool making?! Tue Jun 02, 2009 4:19 am | |
| chapter 10-tool making.. dear diary, claff a.k.a claire and cliff is now part of my growing farm family.. i hope to see new changes life gives me.. and cliff,i hope he feels the same as me.. claire (lights out in the farm) (while at cliff's room,cliff is quietly staring at the bright face of the moon) cliff:i hope more changes to come in my next stay here..good night..claire..
(the next morning) Claire: (yawn) Ah.. What a wonderful morning! (Claire quickly fix her bed and then take a bath and put some new clothes, after that she made a simple mouth-watering miso soup..) Claire: (sip) Ahh.. What a wonderful energizing soup.. (knock, knock) (The blonde was shocked for someone to knock at her door, is it something good, bad or am i imagining things? The blonde said to herself) (She first wipe her face with a tissue and then fix the table) (she opened the door and shocked to see) Gray: Hi! Claire: Oh Hi... You surprised me?! What do you need? Gray: I made this tool, it's a axe, could you try it? (Points on a stump) Claire: Wow.. I'll be happy too!! (gets the axe) (Claire sets the axe at the stump and releases the axe at the stump) (the axe shread into pieces) Claire: (Shock!!) Gray: (Mad) I knew it! I should make it more better right? Claire: Don't be mad Gray, Let's make this axe together.. Gray: (Blush) We could use grandpa's shop, he's not at the shop this moment, he said i'm free to use it.. so let's go! Claire: Axe making here we go!!! (At Saibara's Shop) Gray: Well, here we are.. Let's start doing it.. just give me what i needed Claire.. Claire: Sure Gray Gray: Hammer Claire: (gets the hammer) here Gray: Iron Claire: (get the iron) here (pound, pound) Gray: Umm.. Wooden handle Claire: (gets the wooden handle) here (pound, pound) Gray: Ahh.. Can you get me some water? Claire: (Gets a glass of water) here... (gets the handkerchief) here's the handkerchief.. Gray: I didn't ask for it.. Claire; No, i mean (then claire used the handkerchief to remove the sweat in gray's face) Gray: Th--Thanks (blush) |
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ihearthm New Member


Number of posts: 27 Roleplay Name: tennira
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Mon Jun 29, 2009 10:30 pm | |
| such a good story  |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Tue Jun 30, 2009 12:45 am | |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Wed Jul 01, 2009 9:31 am | |
| it's getting so exciting! not that it wasn't exciting to start with |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Thu Jul 02, 2009 12:58 am | |
| it's about to end though.. |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Wed Jul 22, 2009 2:37 am | |
| oh...  |
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clairexcliff Hero


Number of posts: 4674 Roleplay Name: Amando
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 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Wed Jul 22, 2009 7:23 pm | |
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Natt77 Sprite


Number of posts: 1635 Roleplay Name: Natt
 | Subject: Re: i wish i have three hearts-claire Sun Aug 16, 2009 12:24 am | |
| Hurry up making the ending then! |
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