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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Oh the beauty of hate Sat Jun 27, 2009 1:53 pm | |
| Chapter one-aint hate grand?
"Move." he glared "No." no glared back. I sware if you looked hard enough, you'd see lghting shoot from out eyes and crash into eachother. "uhh guys, you you not fight?' Juile asked. she closed her eyes and smiled, a sweat drop appaeared on her head. "Just as soon as she gets outta my way!" vaughn snapped. I put my hands on my hips. "uhh i'm sorry what!? as soon as i get out of your way?" "i just came here to buy medicne for my animals and now you're telling me to leave!" "how heartless can you get!?" Allas, it was a wensday. One of the most wreched days of the week. "heartless?!?!" vaughn yelled back with an angry sign on his head. "the moment you came in here you gave me attitude and then get in my way of doing my job!" "Man! you're such a priss!" "a WHAT!?" "like you got room to talk cowboy!!"
"oh dear, are they at it again?" maribelle sighed. Julie nodded and let out a sigh. they continued to bicker. "well if you got what you need, then leave!" vaughn said now trying to control his temper. "Guys, if you're going to Fight, could you please not do it here, you're scaring people." Marribelle said. Both vaughn and i looked at the other costomers, they all looked at us wide-eyed. "ugh, fine!" i said stressfully. 'but this isn't over cowboy, you can bet your hat on that.' i said as i walked out the door. "wouldn't dream of it princess.' vaughn grumbled. I stormed outside, my hands were clenched in fists. "wendsays, i curse thee!" i said to nobody at all. It was summer, and as hot as ever. I had been working extra hours at the farm.
I bet you're wondering why vaughn and i are at such odds. It happend the first day he came to this island, i was on the beach and saw a new face, so i thought i'd introduce myself. The moment i got to him he looked stright at me and said 'what do you want?" I have a short temper, so i tired to keep my cool and say hi. but before i could say anything, he spoke. "if you don't want anything, than for goodness sake, go away." ''you're taking awya precious time i have left in my life." 'i'd rather it not be wasted on some girl." and that's basicly what did it. I can't stand people like that! we've been at odds ever since. "i sware on every peach that grows on my tree i will destory him!" i said with an evil laugh. it was late, so i went home and took a shower. Tomarrow woul be better, becuase he was leaving. I finalyl fell into a deep, dreamless sleep.
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Number of posts: 930 Roleplay Name: Kathia or Kat
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:00 pm | |
| hehe, i like the story so far, continue,I wanna know what happens next! |
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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:05 pm | |
| yep, therw will be parts >:3 The name of the narroater, by the way, is Cassey. I know alot of you are suspecting they'll fall in love, but as the author, i can not garentee dat  whether they end up together won't be detmerind till da end~ |
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Number of posts: 930 Roleplay Name: Kathia or Kat
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sat Jun 27, 2009 2:56 pm | |
| GASP!ok yea i wanted to know her name.but GASP!i need to wait ill the end! |
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:20 am | |
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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:41 am | |
| Chapter two- Why did you look at me like that? it's creepy.
When i woke up in the morning and got all my chores done, i decided to explore the forest today-newley opened. I tied my light brown hair into a ponytail and grabbed a backpack filled with water, first aid, cramra, food, the whole works.
The walk there seemed longer than usual, but somehow safter when i didn't spot cowboy anywhere. Reaching the bridge and glancing behind me one more time, i advanced into the forest. It was rather peaceful and quite. With the occational bird chirping or bug buzzing. If i was lost, i didn't really care. I finally made it to a pond, a rather big one at that. I deicded this would be my place to rest. I ploped on the ground and pull some food out of my bag. I was taking a big swig of water when i heard rustling in the bushes.
i stopped for a second, pulled the water bottle from my mouth, and glanced in that dicection. Nothing. I took out a sandwhich and started to eat it when the rustling came again. This time, i stood up and caustiously walked over. As i approched the bush, suddenly something popped out, i let out a gasp, but then i relized it was only a squirl. I let out a sigh of relief and then turned around. The moment i did, i felt all the air rush out of my as i saw wolves circillng around me. I felt my body shake. they didn't look very friendly, and they looked hungy too. i wanted to run, but my knees locked into position. i wanted to scream, but my mouth was dry and my lungs wern't allowing it.
one of the wolves advanced towrd me. It was so close when then, someone walked out. the wolves ran towrd him, yipping happily. Vaughn looked up at me. "you're turning purple, idiot." he said. relizing i had been holding my breath, i let the air woosh into my lungs. i felt wobbly all over. vaughn leaned down and pet one of his dogs. When he looked up at me, i sware i detected an once of worry in his face. But it was too quick come and gone to be sure. His expression turn irritated. "well, are you going to stand there like and idiot or speak?" I just shook me head. This was rather creepy and akward. A bit embarresed, scared, and upset, i picked up my thigs and turned to leave without another word. "hey!" i heard vaughn yell. i stopped and glanced behind my sholder. I couldn't emagine what expression was on my face, becuase the moment i looked at him, a wave of emotions crossed his face. Worry, confustuion, anger, and regret. I shook me head and contiued on down the path.
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Number of posts: 930 Roleplay Name: Kathia or Kat
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:29 pm | |
| hehe!WRITE SOME MORE!its getting good! |
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Number of posts: 2119 Roleplay Name: Blue
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 3:32 pm | |
| It's storyline is going great, and you've got quite nice use of adjectives and stuff... Just remember to use paragraphs though, because it's hard to read giant blocks of text. :O
Remember paragraphs, and you've got gold, Kazu~ I like it so far, and the storyline is nice~ ^.^ _____________________  HOO HOO HOO |
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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:05 pm | |
| ok. ya, we just typing class en stuff and we had to use parapgraphs. i'll go back and fix it~ FIXED! |
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Sun Jun 28, 2009 4:16 pm | |
| Chapter three-There are plenty of other fish in the sea.
A few days had passed since that incident in the forest. I avoided vaughn for the rest of that day. I was out in my feilds now. I had been pushing my limits latley, and people were noticing. They told me to take it easy, but i just couldn't. I may be sutbborn and ill-tempered, but if there's one positive thing i am, it's hard-working. Good to know i have at least one good trait. If you can concider that a good trait.
Finally finishing my farm work, i headed inside to take a shower, it was a rather hot day and was sweating real badly. The bath felt good, it helped ease my head ache as well. It helped my relax my mind as well as my body. Though one thing was still confsusing me, what was that look he had on his face? A mix of emotions, it had been. Perhaps he felt guilty? Of that was the case, then good, that danr cowboy deserved to feel guilt. Though for some reason, i also felt slightly guilty. And the worst part was, i didn't know why. Should i feel guilty? What for? I shook my head and brushed it off to the back of my mind where it could bother me later.
Well, that day, that dreaded dreaded day had come. Wensday. I didn't bother stopping by merribelle's shop to say hi, becuase i knew he'd be there. Nope, i headed strieght to the beach with my fishingrod and bait. I had found myself fishing alot latley. Perhaps just to releif some stress by taking it out on the poor fish. Ah well, there are plently more fish in the sea. I took my stuff up to the dock and baited my rod, then cast it out. Incase you haven't noticed, i'm not a girly girl like alot of the girls on this island. In fact, elliot's sister was probably more girly than me. After about ten mintues, i finally got a bite. "Finally! time for some action!" i said now pumped up. It was a big one, perhaps bigger than i thought. It all happend so fast, i was pulled into the ocean so fast and suddenly i didn't have time to act. i tried to hold my breath, but the iky salt water had already rushed into me, making my lungs sting. the last thing i saw before blacking out, was someone dive in after me. |
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:22 am | |
| Pretty good story. I like it so far. ^^ |
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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:43 am | |
| Chapter 4-Fish love, Fish kiss
When i woke up, i was un someone's bed. "ah! you're finally awake!" the voice said. it was one i didn't reconize. "what...?" i asked almost dreamily. i heard him let out a chuckle. 'where am i..?" i asked trying to sit up. I still felt dizzy. "you're in my house." the voice said. i turned and looked at a boy. I hadn't seen him around before. He was..kind of cute... I felt my face fluster. The boy ntoiced my expression and laughed. "what's wrong?" "you're face is all red." he smiled....it was beautiful. "what happend?" i asked avoidind his eyes. Confustion filled his face. 'You were just in the ocean, i saw you jump in." now it was my turn to be confused. "i didn't jump....' i said slowly. "oh?" he seems surpised. "what happend then?" this time, i was red with embarresment. "you'll laugh." i grumbled. she walked over and sat down. "i won't i promise." he smiled. "ok. well....i was pulled in...by a fish."
i watched his expression to see if he's laugh. Nothing. No even a twitch. "arn't you going to laugh?" i demanded. The boy shook his head. "there's nothing funny about that.' he said. "trust me, it's happend to me plently of times, i am a fisherman" for the first time, i noticed the details of his house. His fishing rod and how....orginal his house it looked. "anyway, i'm glad you're alright." he said standing up. "i'm denny, who are you?" he asked. "Cassy." i replied. "i have a farm here." Denny shook my hand. "nice to meet you cassy!" he said with that goofy grin. "i have some soup, it'll help." he walked over to a pot on his oven and put some in a bowl. he walked back over an handed it to me. It smelled delicous. I took a bit. "wow!" i said. "is is so yummy!" i ate more. He let out a laugh. 'i'm glad you like is cassy." "stay as long as you like, after what you went through, you shouldn't be going anywhere. "ok." i said closing my eyes and smiling.
"bye denny!" i waved walking up the beach. "come back soon!" he called waving back. I ened up staying at denny's place for a few more hours. I learned alot about him. I also learned i had been out for a few hours. "oh my, really?" "that long?" i had said. "wait, i remeber swallowing alot of water...how did i survive?" denny had turned red at the moment. "well...." he said looking around nervously. "i was trying to get you to wake up without causing a scene, but you swallowed to much water..so i had to.." "had to what?" i had asked cocking an eyebrow. "I AM SO SORRY!" he had said shaking me voilently. "i hope you don't mind losing your first kiss that way!" it had been my tur for my face to turn red. "EHHH!?!?!?" i had yelled. it was quite a mess or a few mintues, but it was rather funny, and i had enjoyed it. Denyy was so handsom, and my heart had been racing the whole time i had been with him. It was late, so i walked streight from the beach all the way up to my farm. I fell asleep that night smiling, and thinking about denny. |
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 11:54 am | |
| Chapter five-Vaughns apopgloy...? but why...? Over the next few days, denny and i had been hanging out. I discovered how much i really like denny and how great of a guy he was. for the first time i felt......diffrent. I didn't care that it was wensday. As long as denny would be here tomarrow, i'd be ok. I was in my house, cooking lunch when i heard a knock at my door. "come in!" i called. I wish i hand't, becuase HE walked in. "ah!" i yelled in surpise. i had been cutting something, and his preasence in my house had been such a shock, i cut myself. "ouch!" i cried holding my finger. a sweat drop appeared on vaughn's head. "cmoon, that was a little over-dramatised princess." he said with irritation on his voice. he made his way over to me. "let me see it." he said with a fustrated sigh. He pulled bandages out of his pocket and wrapped my finger in it. I was slightly shocked by this. "so what are you doing here?" i demanded. vaughn ddin't say anything for a few moments. "well?!" i demanded. "i..came to aplogize..." he said. "about the wolves thing.." I couldn't see his face becuase his hat covered it. But the tone of his voice was regretful and guilty. "i really didn't mean to scare you like that..it's not like i was out to get you or anything.' there was a silence. I put my hands on my hips and let out a sigh. "it's not like that." i said. he looked up at me from his hat. "that was almost a wekk ago, i'm over it now." "so don't worry about it." For a second, i thought i saw him blush, but his hat covered his face again. "well then, see you." he said. He turned and left without saying another word. I let out a sigh. "weirdo..."
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Number of posts: 930 Roleplay Name: Kathia or Kat
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:07 pm | |
| ooooo Denny and Vaughn.....ill keep reading! |
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Number of posts: 988 Roleplay Name: victoria or almond
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:48 pm | |
| oh my gosh this is a wonderful story go on plzzzzzz its just sooo good and i love the way you write this story did you mske it up yourself. |
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Number of posts: 6689 Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 12:50 pm | |
| ya. if i didn't it would be plagerism... ^^' |
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Number of posts: 139 Roleplay Name: Nikkei
 | Subject: Re: Oh the beauty of hate Mon Jun 29, 2009 6:00 pm | |
| Your story is awesome....even tho i luv Vaughn i have to say it's really funny.."Cowboy." That made me rofl...I luv how she and Vaughn fight, it bring alot of comedy to the table-Ur Story is priceless  Gosh...now only if i had that kind of talent*Doubt in self* "-.- |
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