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Was this scary?
YESSS!!!!
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Yep.
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Kind of.
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No way.
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Kritten
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PostSubject: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:34 am

Before you read this it is important that you understand that this is what scares me the most and is scary. It involes a stalker-guy in it and bad things happen to me. This never actually happened! If you get scared really easily don't read this! I don't want you to have nightmares or anything like that. I don't care if you use it at all for scary stories to tell your friends. Just be warned, I did not make you read this. It's your choice...







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Tears of Blood


The snow crunched under my feet as I walked. More gently fell to the ground and piqued me. I wanted to spin around and let my worries go as a little girl would do. As I looked up at the gray melancholy sky I was happy that it was my birthday, but disappointed because I had to walk home from the other side of the Frisbee Golf Course. It was in December and it was cold out. I slowly continued to my house. I was dying from anxiety. I really wanted to spin around. I then checked to see if anyone was around. The coast was clear, one time wouldn’t hurt. I set down my bag and took off my coat. The sudden coldness I felt encouraged me to put my coat back on, however, I ignored that and started to spin. I felt I was in heaven as I spun. Ecstasy poured out of me, I felt truly happy. I soon got tired of spinning and I decided to stop. My nose was red, yet I felt warm. The big breath I let out you could see in the air.
“You should wear a coat in this weather,” a voice said behind me. I spun around and found the stranger closer than I thought.
“Hello sir,” I said with a smile. I bent down to grab my coat, but he grabbed my shoulder and stopped me.
“Umm…, excuse me sir, but I need to get my stuff,” I told the mysterious figure. I moved my arm slightly, but then he hugged me.
The man then told me in a very hushed voice, “Hello Kristin. I’ve been watching you and I want something from you.”
Panic filled my face. “Let me go please,” I pleaded.
“I’m going to get it. After that—Well, I think I’m going to keep it a surprise,” he whispered into my ear.
“Who, who are you?” I questioned him.
“It does not matter,” he laughed, “You’ll be dead in a little while.”
He then took out a knife then led me into a bunch of trees. He then raped me, it seemed he did that forever. He then gagged me.
He said, “Now that I’ve had my fun time for some more.”
The man took the blade of his knife and cut right under my eyes. As tears rolled down my cheeks they turned blood red as they hit my hands. I cannot remember anything after that. Darkness consumed my mind then. All I know is that I have not woken up yet. I wonder if I ever will.
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:39 am

Woah, Nice?
I love scary stories. Though I don't have any of my own to share.
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Oct 26, 2008 11:47 am

eeeeeeewwwwwwww that was a good strong but eeeeewwwww some parts were gross!
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Oct 26, 2008 5:15 pm

I warned you at the beginnig. This is the edited version too.
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:43 pm

whoa it was a bit disgusting at some parts but i still like it :]
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Sun Dec 28, 2008 9:44 pm

I'm glad you think so. ^^
I tried really hard to creep my teacher out. She wrote scary as a comment. ^^

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Mon Dec 29, 2008 5:52 pm

Hahaha
thats what the teacher gets for being so strict to us Twisted Evil
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Mon Dec 29, 2008 6:12 pm

Our assinment was to write a story on what scares us the most, so I didn't hesitate one bit. Twisted Evil

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Tue Dec 30, 2008 11:29 pm

hahahaha ;P
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Wed Sep 16, 2009 6:31 pm

Wow- i find this really awesome story all the way on the back page!!!! Haha, my friends think its weird that I like creepy stuff like this but I really do love it! Awesome!!!! Stalkers are scary but my worst fear *gulp* is so stupid im not even going to say it out loud!
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PostSubject: Re: Tears of Blood (A creepy story perfect for Halloween.)   Thu Sep 17, 2009 1:01 am

wow..good one..although because of this..i can't read it all..it creeps me..
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