xD Please accept my character!

Name: Kannon Brookes
Age: 18
Birthday: Summer 15th
Hair: Wavy brown
Eyes: Baby blue with a slight purple tint around the puple
Clothes: Lots of blacks/reds in winter w/ jeans
sun dresses in summer
dark blue jeans and red "hang off shoulder" shirts in fall
white off the shoulder shirt with black tanktop underneath in spring

Family History: A "topsy turvy" life. Family life was perfect until her father moved away. She became more shy and withdrawn. Kannon has one twin brother named Riley who is away looking for a job to support their mother.
Personality Pros: A true romantic, loves to swim, plays guitar and loves music, spends nights on the beach looking at the sunset, sometimes adventurous
Personality Flaws: Afraid of the ocean at night, her heart gets broken easily, sensitive at times, sometimes mischevious and that can get her in trouble, can anger easily if her "heart strings" are pulled
Way to Trigger Anger: Talk about her father, tell her she'll never find love, tell her she isn't good at guitar

Likes: fish, any desert that doesn't have white chocolate chips
Dislikes: white chocolate chips, octopus, squid, sashimi or any raw fish

Here is the link for a picture of her-- its not working when I preview it.
http://www.tektek.org/avatar/31461979

Okay, now if you could re-reveiw it that'd be appricaited! Thanks for the tips too ES!

Hi there,

Your profile is missing some of the fields. This is the template:

Spoiler:

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You need to add the entire biography part, which includes Family, Personality Pros and Flaws, Likes/Dislikes, Extra Information, and HM Dream Job.

Don't forget to be descriptive when writing your essay. Your profile should be the thing that teaches us the most about your character right off the bat.

To answer your question, characters aren't allowed to have crushes on canon characters (characters from the game). In HD, the original characters are considered non-playable characters, who shouldn't have a big part in your character's life and therefore not in their profile.

I'm going to go ahead and approve this now. :] Go ahead, Steph; you can RP in the HM Worlds.