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PostSubject: Desire of the Naive   Fri Mar 26, 2010 5:57 pm

'My memories with Teito only last a span of a few months when I was young. I still can't get him out of my mind; he was my rescuer, my teacher, and in a way my god. He saved me from living the life of a slave, taught me how to use zaiphon, reunited me with you, and abandoned me. I have no right to say I've been abandoned, but that is what it feels like. He left me in the care of you, who I love deeply, but he became my brother and the most important person in my life. Years have now passed and yet I'm saddened by the events that had happened ten years ago. That is why I must leave and search all seven districts to find him. I am sorry for my sudden dissapearence but it is something I must do.

Love,
Capella'

The woman's hands trembled as she read the letter. Her tears dropped at an alarming rate as she read the letter and she never saw her son again.

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I got addicted to 07 Ghost. Enough said.

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PostSubject: Re: Desire of the Naive   Fri Mar 26, 2010 9:58 pm

Awww.

The Emotion is really well portrayed. I'm not entirely sure what 07 Ghost is, but the way you've written it provokes my interest. Which is good. Very good. 8D
Awesome work, Kitty! 8D

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PostSubject: Re: Desire of the Naive   Mon Mar 29, 2010 7:07 am

Razz 07 Ghost- I am a fan myself. But i liked reading this although it seemed sad and yet somehow, in a way, a little inspiring to me, either way it was wonderful.
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PostSubject: Re: Desire of the Naive   Sun Apr 04, 2010 6:58 am

Very nice, Kitty! You can definitely feel the emotion she is feeling. (:

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