So I toppled across a Naruto RP site, and spent a really long time working on this. When I learned it wouldn't be accepted, I nearly hyperventilating from laughing so much.



Name: Kojin Hiru

((Kojin used to be a ninja, now only used for hospital and medicinal purposes. If you find fault with his bio, please give me suggestions- I'm relatively new at Role Playing, but I've written several essays and fictitious papers in language arts.))

Age: 74 (A bit old, I know.)
Sex: Male
Height: 5'9" (Receded)

Character Type: Medic

Country/Village: Konohagakure
Rank: Special Jonin (If applicable- He only has training in Medical Ninjutsu, and the “Five Katon Fingers”)
Division: Medical-nin

Physical Description:
Kojin is rather old, and frail at that that. He's old, and has one visible "liver spot"; on his left cheek, which sort of looks like a kidney. Once he became old, he began losing most of the muscle he had once had, and isn't physically capable of hurting someone to the brink of fainting with his fists. He's a bit of a hump back, due to old age. It's only mild though, and he uses a cane for physical support.

Kojin's face is hollow, in other words, his skin sinks closely to his skull, and many people tease him, and call him "Bulldog" or "Terrier" for it. He doesn't seem to mind much about the "Bulldog" joke, as his voice is gruff and "deep in that old guy way". Having pale gray eyes, his stare can be menacing; due to the fact of a genetic disease in the eyes- Coloboma, which made the pupil pure black, and part of it stretched abnormally outward; towards the bottom of the eye. He has worn glasses ever since he was three.

Clothing: Kojin usually wears his long, flowing pale yellow robes. It has intricate designs, and it's distinguishable features are:
A Konoha Ninja Symbol on the back.
A zig-zag pattern near the bottom of the robe.
And two pockets, on either side, by the hip.
He also wears the same color of pants under the robe, and has netting around his chest. And of course, he always carries his signature cane- A jagged black, wooden cane which is grasped at the circular, which then spreads downward, to form a cone; sharpened to a point.


Personality: Kojin is a well-mannered, frugal old man. I'm not saying he's cheap- He'll do nearly anything to get a deal, even working down prices. Very loyal to his village, he has chosen the path of the Medical-nin, for honor and the ability to save his village; and due to him being old; he rarely goes on field missions without protection. Being kind and charitable (for the most part- He is frugal after all); during his free time, he’s at the hospital, trying to help in any way possible. However, he nearly always speaks in monotone, and you'll almost never get a laugh out of him- He has no humor. A very serious man, he thinks everyone younger than him should respect him, like it was in “the olden days”.

Nindo: "Way of the Ninja": Respect your Elders, and most of all; me!

Clan/Bloodline: None.

Combo Archetype: Miracle Worker

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Statistics

Physical (Tertiary)

Strength: 1 - 1 - 1 + 6 = 5
Speed: 1 - 1 - 1 + 5 = 4
Stamina: 1 + 29 = 30

Mental (Secondary)

Intelligence: 1 + 2 + 15 = 18
Tactics: 1 + 15 = 16
Willpower: 1 - 1 - 1 + 20 = 19

Chakra (Primary)

Power: 1 + 1 + 20 = 22
Control: 1 + 20 = 21
Reserves: 1 + 1 + 2 + 20 = 24

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Jutsus and Techniques:


Universal Ninjutsu:
Kinobori no Jutsu (Tree Walking Technique)/Kabenobori no Jutsu (Wall Walking Technique): Control: 6; Power: 6; Intelligence: 4
Suimen Hokou no Gyou (The Art of Water Walking): Power: 10; Control: 10; Willpower: 8

Medical Ninjutsu:

Shindan (Diagnosis): Control 2; Willpower 2
Kiyomaru (Cleanse): Power: 3; Intelligence: 2
Teikouryoku (Power of Resistance): Intelligence: 3; Reserves: 3
Tekishusu (Extraction): Control: 4; Power: 4
Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui (Healing Hands Technique: Minor): Control: 8; Power: 8; Reserves: 6
Kigusuri Souzou (Medicine Creation): Intelligence: 9; Willpower: 9; Power: 7
Souzou Dokubutsu (Poison Creation): Intelligence: 15; Willpower: 15; Tactics: 13; Control: 14
Chiyute No Jutsu: Ichidanto (Healing Hands Technique: Major): Control: 21; Power: 20; Reserve: 19; Intelligence: 17; Willpower: 15
Hone Chiyu no jutsu (Bone Healer Skill): Control: 17; Power: 16; Reserves: 16; Intelligence: 15
Chakra Enjintou (Chakra Scalpel): Control: 19; Power: 19; Reserves: 18; Willpower: 16
Hekirekite no Jutsu (Thunder Hands Technique): Intelligence: 17; Willpower: 16; Tactics: 16; Control 15

Konoha Ninjutsu: Katon

Katon: Ichi - Katon: Go (All 5 Jutsus): Power: 19; Control: 19; Reserves: 18; Intelligence: 16


Inventory:

Weapon Points Remaining:

Scalpel x 1:

Bo/Staff x 1:

Kakute x 1 (worn on the left ring finger):

Linger Poison x 1




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Biography:

The sound of a baby could be heard crying.

“He’s not going to make it!”

….

The doors flew open, almost off their hinges, as this newborn was placed amidst a crowd of medical ninja.

This is the tale of Hiro, Kojin; and how his medical talents first came to be.

Kojin was born around Christmas, December Seventeenth to be exact. He was a month premature; and his mother was frail. When he was conceived, he has been badly battered, and had several gashes running around him, due to his mother’s pelvis. When he was born; he didn’t cry- Which lead immediately to him being healed by Chiyute no Jutsu; which didn’t really help him. The Jutsu barely keeping him alive, preparation for a Hijutsu was being made, in an attempt to further heal him.

Well; it worked. After several hours of healing chakra being channeled into him, the deep cuts began to heal; Kojin had been restored- But not his eyes. Still; when he began crying; his parents were relieved; well his father was the only one who could be confirmed being relieved; his mother had fainted several minutes after child birth- Due to the excruciating painful child birth.

Now, you’d think Kojin’s life would be perfect now; right? Wrong.

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Kojin’s family was poor, his mother didn’t work; and his father was only a Chunin; at age 36. His mother, having no ninja talent at all; took care of her newborn baby, rather well, until he was five.

Now that he was “of age”; his parents enrolled him in the ninja academy. It was hard for him; he was the smallest one there, and everyone called him “Runt”. Putting up with this nickname for years, he later received newer nicknames, like “TaiTai”, after something he didn’t do well in.

Yes, Kojin failed nearly every Taijutsu class. The Taijutsu class he did well in was meditation, he could sit in the stance for hours on end. What he lacked in Taijutsu; he made up in tests, and Chakra exercises. Kojin was a smart boy, and it never seemed to change, he just grew wiser.

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By age ten, his parent’s gained a bit more money- Kojin’s father had been promoted to Special Jonin; in the Discipline and Execution fields. Kojin, thinking it was the worse thing to ever happen; denied that his father ever made it to a Special Jonin. Still, the family remained poor; even when Kojin’s mother got a job, as a Flower Shop Cashier.

However, when he became ten, something special happened- He became a Genin. Enthused at this; his father tried to convince him to join the path he had taken- Which didn’t work; and just made the father angry.

Kojin was assigned with two other Genin; and the standard Jonin leader. The squad did basic missions; eventually working their way up into basic C-ranked missions. Their Jonin kept them from taking the Chunin exam for two years; and then he finally signed them up
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Kojin; who had picked up basic fire affinity techniques, remained calm and collected while his other teammates got excited.

In the first portion of the exam; they passed; easily retrieving the scroll; as they had a Hyuuga Clan member on their team. Being able to spy into people’s items proved to be successful; as they were one of the first few to arrive.

Then, in the Preliminary Match; Kojin was pitted against a medical-nin in training.

The fight was difficult, as the Medical-nin kept healing itself; and Kojin was slow. Eventually; he used a Genjutsu; and struck his opponent with “Katon: Ichi”; and burned through the skin; delivering burns wherever he could.

Both of Kojin’s teammates lost.

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During the month of training; he learned “Katon: Go”; which was much stronger, in his opinion, than it’s previous version.

Being pitted against a puppet user from the Sand; in the finals; the battle proved a bit more difficult, due to Kojin’s bad speed. Eventually, he managed to burn through the puppet, and plunge towards the chest of his opponent, ending the battle. (Minor details to keep it short.)
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Usesu had shown intelligence, and chakra control, thus he was promoted to a Chunin. He was then, confronted by several members of the hospital that saved his life as a baby; telling him that they could teach him Medical Ninjutsu; to which of course he accepted; so he could save his comrade’s lives. Since he was the only one who graduated; he was replaced with another Genin on the squad; and rarely kept in touch with them.
During the next few decades, Kojin studied vigorously under the tutelage of the hospital. Rarely being called out for missions; mainly missions that required someone to be healed or something to be healed. When Kojin turned thirty, he was an excellent Medical-nin. He no longer studied under the hospital- He went his separate ways; returning only to volunteer.

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He traveled for a while; learning new healing techniques as he went; rarely making any friends. Due to him being alone nearly all the time; he had to keep an eye out for everything and anything. Also, during this time, he lost all of his humor. By the time he was 50; he had returned, and having aged quite a bit.

He learned both of his parents were dead; and lamented, saying he only wished he was there to be at their funerals.

Soon, he was made a Special Jonin- Due to his medical skills.

By age 60; he had gone on a variety of missions; from C-Rank, to A-Rank. During that time, he had done over 100 missions, and his medical prowess began to become a bit better known.

At Age 70; he was “retired”; but still went on the occasional mission he was needed on; as he didn’t have the strength and agility to keep up. Mainly sealing and healing missions, he has completed about 15 in the past 4 years.




Writing Example:

“……” Was all that escaped Kojin’s mouth this afternoon, as he trailed out of his house, his long robe, trailing behind him. He was looked like a yellow slug in a way; he was uncomfortably hunched over. He continued walking, getting his “weekly exercise”. As he walked around his house, he came to look at the outer wall. Filling his legs with chakra, he leaped, his feet hanging onto the wall. Walking slowly up it; he looked even more like a slug now. Once he got to the top; he began to patrol the perimeter; for no particular reason; other than the beautiful view, and exercise..

Seeing two new Chunin salute him, he felt smug inside; this was a great feeling, after all; to finally be respected. As he continued to walk across top of the Great Wall, a building rose up beside him, white and blue in color. Looking at Magpie nest situated inside a gourd, he continued on. He stopped as soon as he was on the part of the wall; just above the gate.

He turns, looking out at the ground; seeing various ninja leave to perform their duties, missions, more guarding…. And a variety of other things. Looking back up at the sky, he saw the sun, edging behind some of the trees. “………..” Was all he said again. Walking the rest of the perimeter, he greeted everyone he saw with a simple nod, or hand wave. As dusk approached, the outside lights began to come on, illuminating the Village.

Looking around; he saw several fireflies dancing, something he looked at for some time, before continuing to walk. Several minutes passed; as he continued to walk around the large; barrier surrounding barrier. Sighing, wondering where the time went, the sun finally sunk behind the trees. “…..” Kojin warily leaps down from the tower, his robe billowing in the wind as he fell, gracefully. Empowering chakra throughout his legs, he landed, and kneeled for several seconds, to recover from the shock of his leap.

Finally standing again, he started towards his home; his robe dragging behind him; in the same slug like pattern. His Konoha symbol seemed to be illuminated by every passing light. As he passed the dango shop, he made a right turn, and reentered his quaint little house; to prepare himself to go to bed. His lights flickering on and off as he entered each room to do something, he eventually rested in his bed, deep in thought.

Time had escaped him again; but time escapes everybody.

Other Info:
Kojin is not married.

Wess and your Naruto addiction xD

YOU WROTE ALL OF THIS FOR NOTHING? xD

FIIXXX IITTT So it can be accepted >8

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te] He's old, and has one visible "liver spot"; on his left cheek,

Teehee, Liver spot xD

xD

;-;

I'm making a new character.

An epic Genin girl.

Who manipulates ribbons. > (I love the person who came up with that) XD~

XD

Oh you poor soul.

What was wrong with it? Didn't meet their standards? Too long, did not read? By any chance, was something forgotten in that jungle of text?

Quote:

;-; I'm making a new character.

waaaaaaaaat. You poor soul. That'll be like....a research paper's effort.

It was to long for me to read! o.o lolololololol

Uhm...

The character was too old (I LOVE OLD PEOPLE)

Uhm

I didn't write out the mathematics attributes of the combo element.

And a lot of other stuff I don't remember. On the plus side, I'm almost done with the girl. >:3

Ribbonnnnnnnn

Now it's time to write out another 400 word writing example. WOOT

>.>

I should go full RP on you guys. :X

LOL

I feel strange for saying this, but the ribbon thing reminds me of Sandy from Hamtaro. 8D

Ew. they make you do math? Outside school? For fun? -mind explodes-

New Ribbon Girl. >

HA HAMTARO FAN! *high fives*

You're my new Ham Ham friend. ;D

Spoiler:

Name: Sutotto, Monika Age: 12 Sex: Female Height: 5'2" Character Type: Shinobi Country/Village: Konohagakure (Village Hidden in the Leaves) Rank: Genin Division: N/A Physical Description: Sutotto, Monika has the "typical" ten year old girl appearance. She has long brown hair that looks like it takes forever to fix. It has blue ribbons woven throughout the frontal part (see picture); and another one tying back it back in a pony tail, which travels throughout the back of her hair, holding it in place. She has icy blue eyes, and thin, dark brown eyes brows with pretty, long eyelashes. She has a small now, and usually a smug, confident grin. (She doesn't have the moon symbol shown on her face on the picture.) Clothing: Monika seems to wear all blue clothing. Have bandages wrapped around the base of her legs, she wears a light blue, frilly skirt under her jacket. The jacket is connected to long gloves, which her hands go into. They also open up to allow the fingers out, and throughout the gloves, there are 4 small slits (on each arm, a ribbon is woven through two of them, thus two ribbons can be equipped on each arm) that allow something like a ribbon to escape. Near the palm, there are two slits on both side, which allow usage of two more ribbons (one on each side). The jacket is colored a dark colored, navy looking blue; and has a light blue stripe, similar to her hair ribbons; which are woven throughout her separated hair; and which can be used as weapons when required. She's right handed; thus she carries her pouch on the right side, and kunai holster on the left. She also wears ribbon-like bandages under the shirt, which sort of act as shorts, and can be removed, and used as weaponry; when Monika is running low on ribbons, and desperate. She also wears high, dark blue colored ninja sandals, the same color as her jacket. Personality: Sutotto, Monika is a hyperactive twelve year old girl. She's more excited about training than dating, so she constantly rebuffs anyone's attempt to ask her out. Trying her best always; she's not great at taking written exams, making her fill stupid at times. She teases people playfully often, although she doesn't like to be teased herself. Monika also pulls pranks on people she doesn't like. She seems to toy with her opponents, if their on her level or below, but if their stronger, she becomes rather serious. Nindo; "Way of the Ninja": Ribbons..... They signal joy...... Events...... And if you keep bugging me, your death. Clan/Bloodline: None Primary Archetype: Tactician (+2 Tactics; +1 Intelligence; -2 Strength; -1 Power) Secondary Archetype: Ninjutsu Specialist (+2 Power; +1 Control; -2 Strength; -1 Tactics) Statistics Physical Strength: 1 - [4] + 4 = 1 Speed: 1 + 1 = 2 Stamina: 1 + 1 = 2 Mental Intelligence: 1 + [1] + 3 = 5 Tactics: 1 + [1] + 4 = 6 Willpower: 1 + 3 = 4 Chakra Power: 1 + [1] + 4 = 6 Control: 1 + [1] + 4 = 6 Reserves: 1 Jutsus and Techniques Ribon Furuu no Jutsu (Ribbon Wielding Technique) Stage 1: Ribbon Control: Power 2, Willpower 2 Stage 2: Power 4, Willpower 4 (Guessed, not sure how the system works) Stages above are not applicable. Tsume Ribon no Jutsu (Claw Ribbon Technique): Control 3, Intelligence 2 Yaiba Ribon no Jutsu (Blade Ribon Technique): Power 3, Tactics 2 Stage 2: Ribon Hikinobashi no Jutsu (Ribbon Extension Technique): Intelligence 5, Willpower 4, Tactics 4. Gensou Ribon no Jutsu (Ribbon Illusion Technique): Power 6, Control 6, Intelligence 4 Universal Jutsu Stage 1: Anrokku no Jutsu (Unlocking Technique): Power 4, Control 4 Inventory Weapon Points Remaining: 9 Metal Ribbon (Two feet in length) x 7 = 7 Points Kunai x 2 = 4 Points Additional Weapon Points Gained: 0 Biography: A petite, 12 year old girl swung on the Academy swing, hidden in the Shadows. "You want to hear my story? I'm willing to tell.... Just don't tell anyone, okay?" "I was born a normal baby, like nearly everyone else. I don't remember back then, but the latest memories I recall, were around when I was four. My dad kept leaving... And disappeared for days at a time. I kept asking where he was going, and he'd always reply 'Work,'. My mom was also disappearing at times opposite to my dad, and she replied only replied, 'I had something that needed to be done,' It was like they were trying to hide something for me, it was ridiculous. One day, they both left on a mission together. I was left with my grandma, she was more of my mom, than my real one; and a lot prettier too, even though she was a few decades older. My grandma, she always wore fancy bows, and trinkets that had little dangles of cloth on them. There were never more than two on her at a time, something I never really understood; there were three sockets on each bracelet you could insert cloth into. I think you're beginning to get the picture. Yes, my parents attempted to hide the Shinobi World from me; for that reason, we never went out to eat, and I rarely left home. But still, I probably would of known before, had I any memories from early-early childhood; or understood what my parents were saying then. Thanks to my Grandma, though, I learned of the Shinobi World. Allow me to continue," "Anyways, it was almost Christmas, and I was still four," "Grandma..... Ferocious woman if you cross her. Eheh...." the girl chuckles, continuing on with her story. "My grandma accidentally showed me her special technique, dealing with the ribbons she wore. Apparently, there had been a package delay... And the packages wouldn't be there until Christmas day," "My grandma, of course, freaked. I don't think she realized what she was doing, but the strands of cloth on her bracelets, they increased drastically in length; at least two feet. They split open, forming claw-like hands. They gripped onto the one supposed to be delivering the packages, and my grandma whispered something in his ear, which clearly disturbed him. She released him, and he ran off," "I watched the entire thing through the window, and when my grandma returned, I asked her how she had done that. My grandma was obviously shocked, but knew my parents couldn't protect me forever," "So, she told me all that she could, and gave me a few ribbons of my own, the ones that are in my hair now. She showed me all she could do, which scared me to death. Eventually, my parents came back home, and they freaked out on my Grandma," "It was kind off ironic, I mean, I was little, and they managed to hide the Shinobi world from me easily. I really didn't see anyone outside of my family, so I was rather close to them. The family feud continued for about a month, and calmed down shortly after, when my Grandma's presents came in. She sent them as apology presents, which my parents oddly accepted. There was also a certificate in the lot for me.... It said I would be going to the Ninja Academy," "So, a few months after I turned five, I joined in the Academy. I was covered in ribbons, and always wore a flowing kimono into class, along with tons of ribbons throughout my hair. There, I picked up the loving name, 'Ribbon Freak'. We practiced and practiced techniques for years, and we eventually came into Chakra. We studied for months, and about after we began trying to perform our Jutsu (it was a weekend); my parents went on another mission." "My grandma had high hopes for me, and began to show me how to manipulate the ribbons. Loaning me one of her bracelets, she began to talk about how to send your chakra from your body into them, making them a deft limb. I worked my way up from small, flimsy ribbons, to metal ones, two feet in length. After I managed to become rather manipulating them, which took years- I was eleven before I was finished with it all; and I started when I was... About seven, maybe? Anyways..." The girl became teary eyed. "A messenger came... It wasn't long ago..... It said my parents were MIA, which I cried and cried over. It gave us a brief, but censored manuscript of what was going on, and how my parents were believed to be killed, while stalling Snow ninjas in an attempt for the others of their 10-man team to escape," "My grandma and I didn't speak about it much after the first week or so, we were trying to protect each other, in my opinion. Several weeks after, my grandma showed me how to use the Ribbon Wielding Technique more effectively. I learned to make that claw she made, a sword, how to increase the length of my ribbons, and a small version of Genjutsu, which leaves "copies" of the moved ribbons, like you'd see something being played back slowly, that's moving at a high speed; thus creating 'illusions'." "Around that time, I began to pull pranks. From minor stuff, such as mixing up girl's purses, to making graffiti, and signed it, "The Mischievous Ribbon Freak". It's true, I'm not nice. But oh well, it's fun, and gives me a fun hobby... Heh," "I graduated the academy a bit ago, I just performed a few jutsu, stuff I'm never gonna use. The written exam was the hardest part though. It made me feel stupid. But I did okay. Heh... B's aren't that bad, are they?" "And now, we get to where we are now.... I'm currently waiting on a squad opening. I wonder when I'll get one.... Oh! You can't tell anyone about this sob, okay? Don't want to ruin my reputation as the 'Mischievous Ribbon Freak'; okay? Got it, get it, good." Other Info: N/A Writing Example: "Eh....." came the voice of Monika's grandmother. She knocked on the entrance to her granddaughter's room, and entered a short time afterward. Monika sat on a cushion, tying back her hair with the ribbons. "What is it, Grandma?" she asks. "Oh, well if you talk like that, I'll never give you the good news," "....Grandma, what's happened?" Monika said, she soon finished tying her hair back, then she threw on her jacket, and began to tie her bandages around her leg. "We've found you a Jonin Leader," Monika's grandmother said, grinning wide, to show her pure white teeth, which were undoubtedly "false teeth". Monika jumped from the surprising news. Wrapping her bandages around the rest of her legs, she ran over to her dresser, and pulled out a packed pouch, and clipped it onto her jacket, and put on her kunai holster. "Where is he?" "He's at the Hero's Monument..." "What are we waiting for? Come on, let's go!" she shouted energetically, throwing herself towards her grandmother, interlocking her in a hug. "Oh heh... Okay, this way," The two soon exited the house, walking towards the Hero's Monument, which was a considerable distance away. The two had a small conversation on the way down there, but all Monika remembered from it was her Grandma telling her 'Not to rush into things' and 'Respect your Sensei'. Monika was well aware of the 'respect' thing, but she always 'rushed into things'; and nothing bad happened yet, so what now?" As the two turned the clearing, they arrived at the Hero's Monument. There, she found her Sensei and teammates waiting for her. She rushed up to them, ready to converse.... Thread Ratings:

Bahahah. Looks like my...uh...*counts* 6 character profiles on another site. They're all pretty long. And a standard R{ from me on there is about 300 to 600 words.

Although my histories are never quite that long. xD

XD

Well, I had to input events (from previous RP..... I hated reading all that crap. ;-.

So, it's a bit longer.

That sounds a bit nitpicky, but, eh, whatever floats your boat. xD

Nitpicky?

;-;

My poor first bio has been moved to the junk section. XD~

Like, you know...demanding.

Awwww! Poor bio. ;-; I LOVE old characters. They're so cuuute. THEY DO NOT DESERVE TO BE SENT TO THE GRAVEYARD...

IKRT~

He also couldn't leave the village for amounts of time-

And no one has even read the ribbon girl one. >_>