I was 16 at the time, and betrothed to a man named Edger Heartman. My family
was a middle-class one, and Edger's was a first class. "His father a governer." my mother had gushed. "he is so handsom, you'll love Edger!" "well, i must admit, Edger was very good-looking, but-there was just something about him that didn't attract me." "perhaps it was his pride, or the way he veiwed people less forchunte." "Either way, i didn't like him." "And i didn't want to be a first-class lady either." "I would rather be begging for money on the streets then be consumed by wealth and greed." "but, as a girl in my scocity at the time, i didn't have much of that deciction."

"Orginally, the plan was for Edger and I to be married here, in great britain. "but those plans changed a few weeks ago, when a boat that clamied to be "unsinkable" made its way into the paper." "It was then that my future in-laws and my parents decided for us to go to America to get married, and raise a family there." "To be Honest, i didn't think much of it except 'i'm going to be married to the king of idiots in a supposed 'free land'." "Little did i know, the adventure-and romance-that waited for me on the boat known as 'The Morning Star'."



"Sophia Grace Lethner!" my mother shouted for me in the supermarket. I instandly felt my ears grow hot. "Mom!" I snapped. I hated my name. It was so stupid. Sophia Grace? It sounded to eligante. To lady-like. And that wasn't who I was at all. "oh, there you are." my mother said gracfully twirling toward me. "you scared me." "come now, we must prepare for the wedding." "it's in a month you know, and it's never to early to start~" i rolled my eyes as my mother babbled on. my mother was a social-climber. So uppity and talkitive. Now don't get me wrong, i love my mother, she's just to-girly for my taste. I had always been diffrent from other british dames. While walking with books on their head, i would be playing in the mud. While waring fancy dressing and drinking expensive tea, i would be waring play clothes and drink water only when i got thirsty. The Debutaunt life wasn't for me. and, it never would be.

(finishe dis later, please tell me how it is~ don't hold back!)

"You stole this from the movie didn't you?"

it's based off the movie. i didn't steal anything. although i've never seen the movie, i kno what it's about and i read about it online. it's similer to it.

"I thought so." n.n

so, how is it so far? :3 i've deicided, i want to be a really good writer, so i will take critism and suggestions! >:3

"Good and i can't wait for the romance, but is he gonna die like the guy did on titanic?"

hmm dunno, it would make sence but it's kinda obveous.

"C'mon make a LASTING love."

maybe i'll make a twisted ending full of violence and ecplations and DEATH! >

You might want to change the name of the boat. It could be considered plagirism or otherwise it's illeagel. It has a nice concept to it, but it is too close to the novel The Titanic (Yes, the movie is based of the book.)

"She's right." -.-

i changed the name of the boat. maybe i should delete it and lable it "void" cu i got nothin'

"It doesn't matter."

still, i don't want to copywrite anything

"Right!" O.O

so...should i change the plot? i still want it to be about a girl getting on a baot and the boat sinking due to some sort of problem.

"No the plots perfect keep it like it is."

r u sure it's not copywrite? *worried*