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afsangel
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 Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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 | | Subject: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:08 pm | |
| It's been three weeks, since that fateful day
I still remeber the time we used to run and play.
But now i fear for the very worst
I wait silently in my basment, for the paypent of foolishness, or what it's worth.
If i had one regret, it would be making this mistake
and watching everybody suffer, and make great haste
The end is near now, i am full of fear
So much that on the floor, are my bloody tears!
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Kritten
Admin
Number of posts: 8754
Roleplay Name: Kitty Kitz
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:12 pm | |
| Hmmm...
You spelt bloody wrong. Otherwise it's good it has a nice dark feeling to it. Very misterious and mournful. _____________________ | Quote: | Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll. |
I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥ |
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afsangel
Special Member
Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:13 pm | |
| thanks, i'm speeling imapred XD i'll fix it asap |
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Red Riding Hood
Sprite
Number of posts: 2119
Roleplay Name: Blue
| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:34 pm | |
| Ohh, very nice~
You've neatly captured an isolated grievance, and immense regret.
I CAN FEEL THE AWESOME RADIATING FROM THIS POEM~ _____________________   HOO HOO HOO |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:35 pm | |
| and blood. the scent is strong with this one |
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Red Riding Hood
Sprite
Number of posts: 2119
Roleplay Name: Blue
| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:36 pm | |
| Was that a Star Wars parody? XD
INDEED. (Perfect time for the Blood song!) _____________________ HOO HOO HOO |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 2:39 pm | |
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iAwesome
Farmer
 Number of posts: 205
Roleplay Name: Jake
| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:08 pm | |
| WHOA 0.0
I love it! Kinda scary.. XD
<3 |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:11 pm | |
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Kritten
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Number of posts: 8754
Roleplay Name: Kitty Kitz
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:15 pm | |
| I love it the most!!! _____________________ | Quote: | Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll. |
I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥ |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 5:20 pm | |
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35bell
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Number of posts: 5130
Roleplay Name: Genna Song
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody tears Thu Mar 05, 2009 8:56 pm | |
| | iAwesome wrote: | WHOA 0.0
I love it! Kinda scary.. XD
<3 |
Yes it is kinda scary but good at the same time. 0.0 |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 3:56 am | |
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35bell
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:40 am | |
| | afsangel wrote: | | thanks~ love the dress |
No problem~And Thank you! |
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Sanaka*~
Master Farmer
Number of posts: 1301
Roleplay Name: Frederik
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 8:37 am | |
| ooo O_O FINALLY got to read something good ... <3
Just got to love the feeling it gives...
Silent,dark,lonely,beautiful.... and chaotic
"Peace is only a dream... A dream that humanity crated to feel safe and happy... But there will never be peace, since even in the brightest soul there always will be darkness" forgot who said that but the person is realllly smart~ |
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afsangel
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Fri Mar 06, 2009 12:07 pm | |
| i bet that person is. but whos' to say the world can't be peaceful. |
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35bell
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| | Subject: Re: Bloddy Tears Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:08 am | |
| | Sanaka*~ wrote: | ooo O_O FINALLY got to read something good ... <3
Just got to love the feeling it gives...
Silent,dark,lonely,beautiful.... and chaotic
"Peace is only a dream... A dream that humanity crated to feel safe and happy... But there will never be peace, since even in the brightest soul there always will be darkness" forgot who said that but the person is realllly smart~ |
Uh Sanaka? are you a goth or an Emo? O_O |
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afsangel
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Number of posts: 6689
Roleplay Name: Kazumi Martin
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| | Subject: Re: Bloody Tears Sun Mar 08, 2009 3:47 pm | |
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