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PostSubject: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:54 pm

Prologue

"Sis."

She ignored him, the wind brushed her hair gently. Her petite figure shook as she cried helplessly on the forest floor, her pititful cry echoed throughout the brightless night.

"Please speak to me. Your in danger, follow me!"

He repeated the useless words, their bodies slowly, mentally, grew farther and farther away from each other, until a world of their own was created.

"Your my sister! Hurry up! Mom and Dad are gone! Follow me- 'THEIR' coming!"

She had not budged, and he watched as his younger sibling weeped alone near the house, near the exit, where they would storm through. A strong wind blew the rooftop off the house, and it crashed only too near her.

"Hurry! I don't want you to die! Hurry!"

His wail, her tears.

"Sister is with Mom and Dad! And your MY sis, too! Please move!"

The pulse of his heart began to race, his body temperature growing lower and lower in the strong, hurricane winds. The girl twitched slightly, and sluggishly began to stand.

"HURRY!"

But by then, they were here.
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 6:55 pm

Hmmm...
Makes me wondering. Is this the ending or a leading part of the story. I'm curious.

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:19 pm

heehee! reader Wink

Chapter One 1/3

"The usual?"

"Yeah."

Skye leaned over the counter, closer to Jill.

"You working part-time?"

"Yeah, for Kai."

"Cool."

He watched her prepare some shaved ice, and pour it into a dish. Her delicate fingers smoothed the counter, she gracefully pushed the dish over . . .

"Skye! Are you in this world?"

"S-sorry! Yes, ma'am! I am!"

Skye began to realize he was saluting, and quickly pulled his arm down-pulling a muscle.

"Ack! I pulled a muscle- again."

Jill giggled, and tried to hold back a laugh; but failed.

"You look so funny!"

Skye blushed, and took the shaved ice without another word. He left with the dish, head down in a skulky mood.

"She'll never like you now, smarty pants."

A spicy scent wafted into his nose, and a tanned boy popped in front of him.

"Hey, dude!"

"Kai!"

Skye stood in shock, and looked down at a broken dish with a melting pile of ice. He'd broken a company's dish, and lost food.

"Oh, god. I'm so sorry, Kai!"

He began to cry frustrated tears, and carefully, but quickly, picked up the pottery shards and rushed back to the stand in dismay.

"Sorry, Jill . . ."

She'd seen him before, with the sly smile, and in a flash he'd disappear again, always accurately mysterious and cocky. But now- he was blushing red, stuttering, and shy.

From shy to sly . . . that's my Skye.

"Mother's words?"

Skye looked up at her curiously,

"Mother's . . . words? What do you mean?"

Jill looked at Skye, her face beet red like the fake coloring in the shaved ice Skye'd paid for, and stuttered her words.

"Somehow, some way, my mother would always talk about you. And for some reason- she had a baby picture of you- as if she'd stolen it . . ."

Skye gasped.

Could she be . . .

"Yes, Skye, mother always cried at nights. Wishing her 'son' would come back."

sister?
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:22 pm

They are related?!?! (Well that's what I think.)

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 7:33 pm

damn u found out xD

well.....theres something coming that is totally unexpected Wink
more tomorrow
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Fri Mar 06, 2009 9:14 pm

Okay. I'll be waiting.

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Say WHAT?   Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:07 am

But I'M Jill. I want to marry Skye. Please say it isn't so!!! No
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:47 am

Everyone loves skye.....
Really once you marry him on the game he is lazy!

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Kazumi couldn't help but feel a bit nervous around Cody. He was unlike anyone she had ever seen before. His voice was smooth, his skin fair and his hair the perfect shade of brown. But his eyes had to be the most wonderful thing about his looks. Yes, he was like a giant Ken doll.


I love you Kazu. ♥♥♥♥
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 7:02 am

"it's not his fault he has low blood pressure!" XD
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:09 am

he is pale. Really pale.
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 8:11 am

By the way: what's up with the wedding gift thing on your avatar card thingamabob? Question
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 9:12 am

"that signals that i'm officially married to jay."
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:02 am

gothica800 wrote:
"that signals that i'm officially married to jay."


Yea. You can get married on this website (If you want to)
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sat Mar 07, 2009 10:19 am

"except to the original harvest moon characters, so mikki needs to break up with her boyfriend."
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PostSubject: Re: Our Hidden Thing   Sun Mar 08, 2009 7:44 am

Aww man! Well I haven't found anyone special yet. After all, it's my third day here. I like this one guy in my class named Michael, but what are the chances I'll find him here? Razz
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