Hmmm i reall like this series. *thinking* ideas huh? well the story is very interesting, but you could have more going on, i mean in between the three main characters, like maybe you can involve the other villagers into the story somehow. Sort of be felxable with the selections of possibilities in the characters and sences. ( just throwing it out there, sorry if these ideas are not the best ). maybe get the goddess involved with trying to help skye fix his mistake. And possibly have him become a better character (not much of a thief anymore) when his ordeal is overcome. But its only my silly thoughts. i still love the story, it makes me want to read more.

Yay! I feel special!

hehe you feel special? well you should, your story is superly amazing! Hopefully i helped you brainstorm a little! Ican't wait for more!

Yay! Ok, I'll keep thinking of what could happen next.

I like it ^_^ hmmmm as for Ideas I can't think of any good ones....but like darkbluesoul said you should include a little more of the town peole to cause conflict with the main characters... but I can't wait till you update again ^^