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Eternal Silence
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 Number of posts: 6205
Roleplay Name: Arden Auiban
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 | | Subject: Untitled Poem Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:52 pm | |
| I know this poem is kinda bad-ish. I wrote it in a state of boredom. It was authored in about three seconds. D: Like I said, though, I'm bored. XD
When the snowflakes fall
Catching on your skin
Sit back and watch the sunrise
Watch your life begin
With every new arrival
There is a rebirth
The rekindling of joy,
Of merriment, of mirth
No matter the occasion
Or time of the year
There is love
When dear ones are near
And the problems you had
All seem to melt away
The sun is rising,
With it, a new day
Last edited by Eternal Silence on Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:56 am; edited 1 time in total |
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35bell
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Number of posts: 5130
Roleplay Name: Genna Song
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| | Subject: Re: Untilted Poem Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:06 pm | |
| I'm soo bad at making Poems! Your good at it!~ I loved it~ Make more! Or else.... |
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Sanaka*~
Master Farmer
 Number of posts: 1301
Roleplay Name: Frederik
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| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:19 am | |
| At first it looks kind of lonely and dark then it gets brighter how awesome ^_^ |
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gothica800
Banned
Number of posts: 4632
| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 6:21 am | |
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Eternal Silence
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Number of posts: 6205
Roleplay Name: Arden Auiban
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| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:53 am | |
| Kyaa~~ Thank you!  |
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gothica800
Banned
Number of posts: 4632
| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Sun Mar 15, 2009 7:54 am | |
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Eternal Silence
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Number of posts: 6205
Roleplay Name: Arden Auiban
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| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Tue Mar 17, 2009 5:01 pm | |
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moonlighto3
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Number of posts: 800
Roleplay Name: Mist Evergreen
| | Subject: Awesome Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:30 am | |
| your poem is awesome! I want to be a writer someday, and i want to be like you! you're so good in making poems and stories.
I showed many people my stories and poems, but i don't think they're amazed.Not like you..(Wait,, I'm such a blabbermouth..)
well, goodluck in making them! |
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Eternal Silence
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Number of posts: 6205
Roleplay Name: Arden Auiban
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| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Mon Mar 23, 2009 12:54 pm | |
| Daaawwww...I feel all warm and fuzzy...*hugs* And I'm sure you're AHMAHZING at writing...but you'll have to post some stories here for me to make sure, hint hint! XD |
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moonlighto3
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Number of posts: 800
Roleplay Name: Mist Evergreen
| | Subject: Re: Untitled Poem Thu Mar 26, 2009 6:03 am | |
| | Eternal Silence wrote: | | Daaawwww...I feel all warm and fuzzy...*hugs* And I'm sure you're AHMAHZING at writing...but you'll have to post some stories here for me to make sure, hint hint! XD |
ok! i promise i'll post some stories here, that's for sure! and if i did post something, could you please take a look at it? and comment on it Honestly because some people comment on works that they're good just to make them feel better..
see you around!
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